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Eric Lefebvre

153 words · 12 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Louis Villeneuve (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, I am a father and a grandfather, and my own father is 94 years old. We are all experiencing the challenges that you are talking about. My question is this: Do you believe that you can predict with certainty where oil prices will be in six to 12 months? I believe that the government is acting responsibly by proceeding the way it is.”
Statement grade
C
Average 60 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 8%Anecdote 16%Aside 10%Reasoning 37%Positioning 24%Procedure 3%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsthe member for Brome—Missisquoi is a colleague for whom I have great respect.Thanks Anecdote · 25 wordsHe is fortunate to still have his father around and to be a grandparent. As for me, I will become a grandfather in two weeks.1Anecdote Aside · 16 wordsI will get the greatest gift that life can give me in a couple of weeks.Aside Reasoning · 40 wordsWe all think about our children and grandchildren. I am certain that all members here, on both sides of the House, are thinking about their children and grandchildren.Unearned certainty Our shared goal is to leave a better country for future generations. Positioning · 14 wordsI am sure that we all share that vision.Off pointUnearned certainty Where do our visions differ?Positioning Procedure · 5 wordsI spoke earlier about predictability.Procedure Positioning · 23 wordsWhat we on the Conservative side are saying is that we need to give our constituents some predictability by permanently eliminating this tax.Positioning Reasoning · 17 wordsThere are many ways to make up the revenue, such as by reducing the size of government.

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