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Jean-Denis Garon

140 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, let us further advance this issue to low-income individuals. When tax is reduced on gas for public transportation, whether it is buses or taxis, which are often used by all sectors of society, there is a direct benefit for that in municipal budgets, which decreases pressure. At a time when gas prices are volatile and the issue of affordability is there, it seems to make a whole lot of sense to give Canadians a break on affordability by providing this excise tax, because it covers everyone.”
Statement grade
B+
Average 80 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 26%Claims 34%Reasoning 38%Aside 2%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 6 wordsmaybe he is just killing time, PositioningOff pointClaims · 20 wordsbut the minister told us this was a targeted measure to help people.1 Then he told us it affects everyone.2Partly on point Reasoning · 43 wordsClearly, the goal is to have a direct impact on people’s wallets, not through lower transportation costs, Unearned certaintywhich in turn lowers this and that. The purpose of this measure is not to lower food prices through the supply chain.3Off point That takes something else. Claims · 27 wordsIf they want to support public transit, then why did they cut the public transit budget?5 Why did they reduce funding to the provinces for public transit?6 Reasoning · 10 wordsThat would help our public transit systems and our infrastructure. Positioning · 31 wordsThat is a real issue, unlike claiming that “if we lower the excise tax through a 14th degree effect via Mars, it will have an impact on the STM in Montreal.”4Positioning Aside · 3 wordsCome on, now.Aside

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