Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Giovanna Mingarelli

154 words · 11 sentences · 12 clauses

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Procedure 5%Reasoning 30%Positioning 23%Claims 36%Greeting 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordstoday I rise to mark Global Dignity Day.1Procedure Reasoning · 25 wordsDignity is something we all share regardless of our background, gender, beliefs, language or circumstances. We all deserve to be treated with respect and kindness. Positioning · 36 wordsNow more than ever, we need a kindness revolution. In a world that can sometimes feel divided, our common humanity is stronger than what sets us apart. I am proud that Prescott—Russell—Cumberland is leading the charge.Positioning Claims · 55 wordsDuring national Kindness Week this year, municipalities across our compassionate riding came together to show that kindness matters.2 In Russell, kindness meant bowling with firefighters and kids, 3and in Casselman and in Clarence-Rockland, it meant spending time with seniors.4 In Alfred and Plantagenet and in Hawkesbury, kindness meant sharing acts of kindness with the community.5 Reasoning · 21 wordsThese acts remind us that kindness starts with each and every one of us and that every gesture makes a difference. Greeting · 9 wordsI wish all Canadians a happy Global Dignity Day.Greeting

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