Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 55%Anecdote 29%Thanks 16%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 42 words50 years ago, a small group of Muslim families opened Manitoba’s first mosque on Hazelwood Avenue in Winnipeg, now known as the Pioneer Mosque.1The community grew, and the Manitoba Islamic Association opened the Winnipeg Grand Mosque on Waverley Street in 2007.2Anecdote · 13 wordsI remember people wondering why it was built so far out of town.AnecdoteClaims · 23 wordsToday, it stands at the heart of the thriving neighbourhood of Waverley West in Winnipeg South, serving thousands in Manitoba’s growing Muslim community.Anecdote · 32 wordsMy friendships with families like the El Tassis and the Zeids go back decades.Through Ramadan Iftars, community gatherings and my work helping families reunite in Canada, those friendships have grown manyfold.AnecdoteClaims · 21 wordsThe MIA continues to build bridges of understanding, welcoming neighbours of every faith to its open houses and other community events.Thanks · 25 wordsI thank Manitoba’s Muslim community for their friendship, their trust and their tremendous contributions to our province, and I congratulate them on 50 remarkable years.Thanks