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Gregor Robertson

117 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Dan Muys (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister promised Canadians the most ambitious housing plan since the Second World War, yet his own government’s numbers tell a different story. According to CMHC, housing starts dropped 11% in the month of September. After a year and a half of more spending, more bureaucracy and more Liberal promises, fewer homes are being built, while home ownership slips further out of reach. How many more young Canadians must give up on the dream of home ownership before the Liberals admit their plan has failed?”
Statement grade
B–
71 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Reasoning 37%Claims 44%Positioning 9%Promise 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 43 wordsthere are some basic facts around the housing market that we are challenged with as a country right now and that many other countries are challenged with. The world is struggling with uncertainty, and we have to focus on delivering on affordable housing.Vague promise Claims · 52 wordsIf we look at the results across the country, we have successful cities that are increasing their housing starts. We have some markets that are slow. We are intervening.Vague promise We put GST on the table across the country right now. In Ontario, one can save up to $200,000 on a new home.1 Positioning · 11 wordsThat is significant action.Partly on point That is not being supported by Conservatives.PositioningOff point Promise · 11 wordsOn this side, we will continue to take action on housing—Partly on pointVague promise

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