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Caroline Desrochers

114 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Gabriel Hardy (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, the Liberals want facts, so here are a few: 85% of Quebeckers feel pessimistic about home ownership, while nearly 70% of Quebeckers believe that buying a home in their area is impossible and that the situation has gotten worse over the past five years. The Liberals’ answer to that problem is more red tape and even fewer results. Their programs are being designed around large-scale real estate projects in big cities, but circumstances are different in regions like mine. Our businesses are looking for workers. Our young people want to settle in the regions. Families want to own their own home, not continue renting for the rest of their lives. When will the Liberals realize that their programs are not working and design their policies to reflect what ordinary people, like those in Montmorency—Charlevoix, are facing?”
Statement grade
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Average 85 / 100
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Positioning 28%Claims 55%Reasoning 17%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsI would once again invite the member opposite to make sure he has his facts straight before making statements like that in the House.Positioning Claims · 55 wordsThe minister and I spent the summer touring the regions of Quebec.1 We visited Carleton‑sur‑Mer, Chicoutimi and the Gaspé.2 We made announcements, Vague promiseand some projects are currently in the construction phase. We took the needs of the regions into consideration to ensure that Build Canada Homes includes the regions and can build what they need.3 Reasoning · 19 wordsIt is extremely important that we revitalize the regions, keep people in the regions and build the necessary infrastructure. Positioning · 8 wordsWe are here at work with real programs.PositioningVague promise Claims · 8 wordsThe Conservatives just vote against everything we do.4Off point

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