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Mike Kelloway

76 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Leah Gazan (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the Prime Minister called Bill C-39 “the most consequential legislation” in decades. This is true. It tramples on environmental protections and indigenous and workers’ rights while handing ministers king powers to override constitutional safeguards in the name of the so-called national interest. Our constitutional rights are not an inconvenience. Are the Liberals, with the help of the Conservatives, really trying to build a strong Canada, or are they just working together to build a pipeline to the courts?”
Statement grade
C+
67 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 55%Aside 4%Claims 20%Reasoning 9%Promise 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 42 wordsindeed, building Canada strong is focused on building Canada strong, working with every region and working with first nations. It is not just about the duty to consult. It is the right thing to do, working together to build up the country.Positioning Aside · 3 wordsBy the way, AsideClaims · 15 wordsif we look at the bill, it is not about changing standards. That is sacrosanct. Reasoning · 7 wordsWhat it is about is changing processes.1 Promise · 9 wordsWe can do both and we will do both.Vague promise

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