Replying to Todd Doherty (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Madam Speaker, I thank my hon. colleague for bringing this forward. For 11 years, we have seen broken promise after broken promise. Another promise the government made, with regard to an industry that is, I know, as important to Quebec as it is to British Columbia, is that it has, for 11 years, promised to secure a softwood lumber agreement. Today, over 30 mills have closed in my riding. Thousands of British Columbians are out of work. Why should Quebeckers feel that the Liberal government would deliver on this promise when it has broken every other promise it has made to Quebec, and to the nation, over the last 11 years?”
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Greeting · 16 wordsThat is a very good question, Madam Speaker, and I thank my colleague for asking it.GreetingReasoning · 49 wordsMy colleague is obviously generalizing; he is really broadening the scope of the issue, but fundamentally, I understand that we are talking about broken promises.Partly on pointIn our motion today, we are addressing a promise that, while not yet broken, has not yet been kept, and that is very concerning.Claims · 86 wordsI am talking about the $600 million.This $600 million is not a request from Quebec.1It is an amount intended for Canada’s entire cultural sector.2As a result, it is not just about a request from Quebec.Of course, the Bloc Québécois is more focused on Quebec’s demands, that is well known, but in this case, it is a promise to all Canadians and to Canada’s entire cultural sector, which, I would like to remind you, generates hundreds of billions of dollars in revenue annually.3