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Christine Normandin

91 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Madam Speaker, I agree with the member that culture is what gives us our identity. I look across our great nation, and I see the uniqueness of the province of Quebec and all sorts of wonderful things in other jurisdictions. I think of our francophone communities in Saint-Boniface in Winnipeg and in St-Pierre-Jolys in rural Manitoba, which are a part of the very fabric of our society. Over the years, we have seen significant federal investments to support our culture and our heritage. We have a minister who is very proactive on the file. The good news is, as the Minister of Finance would say, we have a budget coming up on November 5. I am sure it will reinforce the importance of culture for all of Canada. In particular, it will single out the province of Quebec and our French language, which every Canadian, I would suggest, is proud of. I would ask the member for her thoughts on the importance of a federal budget.”
Statement grade
C+
65 / 100, held down by Signal
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Procedure 31%The ask 15%Reasoning 23%Positioning 31%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Procedure · 10 wordsI mentioned it in my speech.1 Our request is twofold.Procedure The ask · 14 wordsYes, we are asking that the investments promised by the federal government be delivered.2 Procedure · 18 wordsIf they are included in a budget, and if the federal government makes additional investments, all the better.Procedure Reasoning · 21 wordsWhat we are saying, however, is that it will never replace the share that should be paid by the web giants, 3Positioning · 28 wordswhich pillage the market and give nothing in return. The government is selling us out for cheap without even collecting on the deal.4 That is what is shameful.Positioning

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