Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Heather McPherson

149 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

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Greeting 6%Claims 49%Anecdote 39%The ask 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 9 wordsI rise to honour a remarkable woman, Irene Mathyssen.Greeting Claims · 73 wordsIrene devoted her life to public service and to building a more just society. As a leader, teacher, community activist, cabinet minister, MPP for Middlesex and MP for London—Fanshawe, she championed equality, human rights, women’s rights and a stronger social safety net for all.123 Irene was known for her warmth, her humour, her kindness, her strength and her conviction. She treated everyone with respect and believed in leaving the world a better place. Anecdote · 58 wordsI was fortunate to learn from Irene and work alongside her and her daughter, former MP Lindsay Mathyssen, who said that losing her mother has left an indescribable emptiness, 4but that her legacy, the values she instilled, the example she set and the love she gave so freely to those who knew her will continue to guide us.Anecdote The ask · 9 wordsLet us honour Irene by carrying her legacy forward.Vague promise

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