Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 59%Claims 9%Reasoning 12%Anecdote 20%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 26 wordsI rise today to offer my full support to the mayor of Laval, Stéphane Boyer, who is currently recovering from surgery to remove a brain tumour.1ThanksClaims · 14 wordsFor several years now, Mr. Boyer has dedicated himself to serving the Laval community.Reasoning · 18 wordsPublic life demands a deep commitment and many sacrifices, both for elected officials and for their loved ones.Thanks · 31 wordsToday, I want to express my solidarity with Mr. Boyer, his family and his loved ones in the face of an ordeal that requires a great deal of courage and resilience.ThanksAnecdote · 31 wordsHaving witnessed my own mother’s battle with this disease, I am deeply moved by those who are going through it, 2and my heart goes out to him during this difficult time.AnecdoteThanks · 35 wordsI offer him my full support and wish him strength and courage so he can one day return to his duties.On behalf of the community of Alfred-Pellan, I wish the mayor a speedy recovery.Thanks