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François-Philippe Champagne

101 words · 6 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Dominique Vien (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Quebec’s food banks are overwhelmed. They are now handling a record number of requests for food assistance—more than three million every month. That is a 44% increase over the past five years. One in three children relies on food banks. Vulnerable households now spend 112% of their disposable income just on food, housing and transportation. Will this government adopt our plan to scrap taxes on diesel? It is very simple.”
Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 22%Positioning 25%Claims 35%Promise 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 22 wordsI would like to speak on behalf of all my colleagues and thank those who work in food banks across the country.Thanks Positioning · 25 wordsThey perform essential and extraordinary work helping the most vulnerable members of our society. We have actually gone further than what my colleague is suggesting.Positioning Claims · 35 wordsWhat we have done is provide direct support through the Canada groceries and essentials benefit.1 More than 12 million Canadians are receiving direct assistance to help them at a time when they need it most.2 Promise · 19 wordsOn this side of the House, we will always be there to stand up for the interests of Canadians.Off pointVague promise

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