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Patty Hajdu

108 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Andrew Lawton (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, for a year and a half those arrogant Liberals have been standing in the House and telling us how great everything is. The Prime Minister says affordability is the best it has been in a decade. If that were true, I would not be getting emails like this every single day, and 2.35 million Canadians would not be using the food bank in a single month. Then we have Julia from St. Thomas, the mother of an 11-year-old. She owns a home and has done everything right. She is selling her belongings on Facebook Marketplace so that she can buy her daughter shoes. Are the numbers wrong or are the Liberals?”
Statement grade
D
45 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 30%The ask 40%Promise 7%Procedure 8%Claims 15%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 32 wordsany mother who is facing hardship and has to sell things on Facebook Marketplace to feed her child is something I think we could all say would be an abomination in Canada.PositioningPartly on point The ask · 43 wordsThat is why I think that member of Parliament should go and tell that mother, Julia, that he voted against the school nutrition program, that he voted against the Canada child benefit program and that he voted against the investments in skills training.123 Promise · 8 wordsLet us add the groceries and essentials benefit.Off point Procedure · 6 wordsEvery solution that we have proposed, ProcedureClaims · 16 wordsas the Government of Canada, to help vulnerable people in this country, those guys vote against.Off point Procedure · 3 wordsIn fact, they—Procedure

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