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Jean-Denis Garon

219 words · 17 sentences · 20 clauses

Replying to Burton Bailey (Conservative). The question was off topic, so this reply is judged against the motion.
“Mr. Speaker, I have a simple question. Why should Quebeckers have confidence in another Liberal commitment when the government’s record, across multiple policies, continues to raise questions about delivery?”
Statement grade
F
36 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Aside 10%Positioning 77%Claims 13%

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Mr. Speaker, Aside · 6 wordsthat is a pretty broad question.Aside Positioning · 8 wordsWhy should we have confidence in the Liberals?Positioning Aside · 15 wordsPersonally, I put my face on a blue poster. There are many shades of blue.Aside Positioning · 13 wordsI believe that today’s Liberals are using fear as their weapon of choice.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsThey are using Donald Trump. He is their main political ally. Positioning · 18 wordsFear has allowed them to consolidate support. That is why they are able to walk back their promises.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsThat is why they are able to implement policies that were never even mentioned during the election campaign. Positioning · 130 wordsIt is fear that affords them this freedom. However, this freedom that the Prime Minister grants himself ought to be tempered by a respect for democracy, but the Prime Minister does not seem to have that. He appears to believe that, because the political winds are currently in his favour, he can do as he pleases and take full advantage of it.Motive imputed Does that mean that I, as an MP who is witnessing this, who knows the details of the policies and who is informed about the finer points, have confidence in the Prime Minister?Off point The answer is unequivocally no. I believe these are people who say one thing and do another. I also believe that this tendency is deeply embedded in the DNA of the Liberal Party of Canada.PositioningOff pointUnearned certainty

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