“Mr. Speaker, I would like to thank my colleague for her remarks, which were very clearly stated, naturally. That is the beauty of parliamentary debate. Every party and every opinion can be heard. That said, one thing is important: When someone commits to doing something and the results are not there, they need to acknowledge it. We should remember that this government was elected on the promise to go to the White House with its elbows up. Ultimately, there were no elbows up at all; what we got were thumbs up. As a result, the government decided to abolish the digital services tax, thinking that this would have a positive impact on negotiations. It has already been 16 months since then. Sixteen months later, there are zero results. What are my colleague’s thoughts on this reality?”
Statement grade
B
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 86. The grade is held to 78, 30 above Signal.
78 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 22%Positioning 23%Claims 45%The ask 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 40 wordsI would like to thank my colleague, for whom I have a great deal of respect.I know that he also comes from a media background, and he clearly has a genuine passion for the cultural sector.I salute him.GreetingPositioning · 3 wordsThis was predictable.PositioningClaims · 47 wordsFifteen months have passed, 1and all we have seen are setbacks.We were told it was time for “elbows up”.2Earlier today, I met with businesses that are deeply concerned.The consequences are being felt across the cultural sector and by small and medium-sized enterprises throughout Quebec.Positioning · 20 wordsWorse still, everyone is worried.Partly on pointNot only has the government failed to achieve any meaningful progress, but it gave in.PositioningClaims · 36 wordsIt has tried to make up for that with token measures like this $600 million.3That is nothing compared to the billions forfeited through its capitulation to the web giants.4Even that $600 million remains undelivered.5Positioning · 12 wordsIt amounts to little more than a band-aid on a gaping wound.PositioningThe ask · 21 wordsI hope the government will be able to acknowledge this, deliver the $600 million and then engage in much deeper reflection.Positioning · 7 wordsIt is time we stood our ground.PositioningPartly on point