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Arielle Kayabaga

137 words · 8 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Gérard Deltell (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, I want to commend my colleague for her speech, which was very moving because she shared her story and her family’s story. I thank her family for choosing Canada. Now, we are here to discuss a fiscal reality, a political reality, and also a reality that affects the cultural community that she holds so dear. Let us not forget that the political party she represents has gone back and forth a few times. At first, it was against the tax, and then it was for it. Then it used it to placate Donald Trump and convince him to strike a good deal with Canada. The reality is that when this government decided to abolish the digital services tax, it was really just to please Donald Trump. Now, 16 months later, the results are non-existent. What are my colleague’s thoughts on that?”
Statement grade
D+
50 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Greeting 4%Positioning 39%Claims 56%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 6 wordsI greatly appreciate my colleague’s questions.Greeting Positioning · 14 wordsI do not think that the question he is asking has a set answer.PositioningUnearned certainty Claims · 44 wordsWhat we have been saying for a while is that we are working to ensure that we do not add any costs that would be passed on to Canadians.1Vague promise The goal is to help our artists and to keep and protect productions in Canada.Vague promise Positioning · 10 wordsThe goal is not to make Canadians’ lives more complicated, PositioningClaims · 12 wordsbut really to ensure that no costs are passed on to them. Positioning · 30 wordsI think that my colleague would also agree that, during a crisis that we did not ask for and that we are currently experiencing across Canada, we must protect Canadians.PositioningHidden agency Claims · 21 wordsWe want to make sure that Canadians do not continue to pay unnecessary fees.Vague promise That is what our government is doing.Partly on point

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