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Lori Idlout

129 words · 10 sentences · 10 clauses

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Claims · 45 wordsUqaqtittiji, over the summer, I welcomed a record number of parliamentarians, over 40, to Nunavut.1 These visits were part of caucus retreats, government announcements, pre-budget consultations and international studies.2 I witnessed parliamentarians interact with Nunavummiut. I watched the meaningful dialogue between lawmakers and amazing Nunavummiut. Positioning · 16 wordsAs the sole MP for Nunavut, I rely on those who visit to become our allies.Positioning Claims · 10 wordsI saw more parliamentarians understand why Nunavut deserves more investments.Unearned certainty Positioning · 39 wordsSince our return here, I am encouraged by those who have shared how important their visits were. I am humbled when they recall what they learned while they were in my beautiful riding, the most beautiful riding in Canada.Positioning Promise · 16 wordsI hope more Canadians come to Nunavut to see themselves in Nunavut, to see the beauty. Positioning · 3 wordsNunavut, our strength.Positioning

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