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Claims · 45 wordsUqaqtittiji, over the summer, I welcomed a record number of parliamentarians, over 40, to Nunavut.1These visits were part of caucus retreats, government announcements, pre-budget consultations and international studies.2I witnessed parliamentarians interact with Nunavummiut.I watched the meaningful dialogue between lawmakers and amazing Nunavummiut.Positioning · 16 wordsAs the sole MP for Nunavut, I rely on those who visit to become our allies.PositioningClaims · 10 wordsI saw more parliamentarians understand why Nunavut deserves more investments.Unearned certaintyPositioning · 39 wordsSince our return here, I am encouraged by those who have shared how important their visits were.I am humbled when they recall what they learned while they were in my beautiful riding, the most beautiful riding in Canada.PositioningPromise · 16 wordsI hope more Canadians come to Nunavut to see themselves in Nunavut, to see the beauty.Positioning · 3 wordsNunavut, our strength.Positioning