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François-Philippe Champagne

108 words · 7 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Eric Lefebvre (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, how can the minister talk about a strong economy when food banks in Quebec are serving more than three million people every month? That is a 37% increase. In my riding, the organization Sécurité alimentaire de Victoriaville is helping 2,224 adults and 1,284 children. In fact, 35% of its clients are children. At the Centre d’action bénévole de Windsor et région, the needs have grown by 50% since the Liberals took office. Will the Liberals eliminate the federal tax on diesel so that groceries are affordable again?”
Statement grade
D–
40 / 100, held down by Signal
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 90%Claims 10%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 97 wordsI know it is Friday and I know that the people of Richmond—Arthabaska—des-Sources are watching question period. They might wonder what their member of Parliament was doing when it was time to vote to help them. I actually know these people.Unearned certainty These are people who are watching and seeing what their member of Parliament is doing.Off point They are wondering where their member of Parliament was when we talked about the Canada groceries and essentials benefit, whether he voted for it or against it.Partly on point That is what the people in his riding are going to be looking at.Positioning Claims · 11 wordsIndeed, the Conservatives voted against every single measure we put forward.1Off point

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