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François-Philippe Champagne

90 words · 10 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Helena Konanz (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, the PBO’s latest report shows that unemployment will soon rise to 6.9%, but in my region it is as high as 8.3%. That includes families in Penticton, Grand Forks and Castlegar who cannot find work and are choosing between buying gas or buying groceries, yet this report shows that Liberal spending will only increase, with more debt. Therefore, higher taxes will follow. Can the Liberal minister explain how their fiscal plan of fewer jobs and higher taxes will help families—”
Statement grade
D
48 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 49%Claims 18%Promise 33%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsI am sure Canadians who are watching are a bit puzzled.PositioningPartly on point Claims · 16 wordsOn one hand, the Conservatives are voting against measures to support Canadians and build the economy, 1Positioning · 23 wordsand on the other hand, they are wondering what is going on. Thank God we are not taking a lot of their advice.PositioningOff point Promise · 21 wordsWe are listening to Canadians.Vague promise We are investing in this economy.Vague promise We are supporting Canadians.Partly on pointVague promise We are investing in our sovereignty.Vague promise Positioning · 10 wordsCanadians are proud. They want this country to go forward.PositioningOff point Promise · 9 wordsThat is exactly what we are going to do.Partly on pointVague promise

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