“Madam Speaker, established in 1945 to support veteran employment, the right of first refusal gave the non-profit and largest employer of veterans, the Commissionaires, preferential access to federal security guard contracts. Considering that a Veterans Affairs ministerial briefing recognized that ending the right of first refusal could negatively affect older veterans, many of whom could struggle to find alternate employment, can the veterans minister tell veterans and Canadians why the Liberal government did this?”
Statement grade
B–
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 75. The grade is held to 70, 30 above Relevance.
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 68%Positioning 21%Promise 11%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Madam Speaker, Claims · 9 wordsyesterday we answered the question about the specific contract, 1Off pointPositioning · 18 wordsbut one thing I want to say to my colleague is what the minister is doing for veterans.PositioningClaims · 25 wordsVeterans today are, on average, 34 years old, 2and they have several skills.They work with drones.They work in aerospace.They work with cybersecurity.Promise · 10 wordsOur job is to ensure that the transition is successful, Vague promiseClaims · 25 wordsbecause the one thing they have asked for is a meaningful career and for their skill set to be recognized in all sorts of fields.Partly on point