Analysis · Speech on a bill · beta

Yves Perron

163 words · 12 sentences · 13 clauses

Statement grade
B–
74 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Greeting 6%Thanks 3%Positioning 17%Claims 50%Reasoning 7%The ask 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 10 wordsI am very happy to see you in the chair.Greeting Thanks · 5 wordsI appreciated my colleague’s speech, ThanksPositioning · 6 wordsbut I am not entirely reassured.Positioning Claims · 49 wordsIt seems like every bill in this Parliament either overrides existing laws or grants more powers to ministers. This bill is highly complex and will require careful study in committee.Off point However, it is already clear that one of its objectives is to confer even more powers on the minister.1Unearned certainty Positioning · 7 wordsWe have some concerns on that front.Positioning Claims · 23 wordsWe also have concerns about Quebec’s jurisdiction, particularly with respect to the development of natural resources and Hydro-Québec, a point of national pride. Reasoning · 12 wordsI think we will need to hear from its representatives in committee.Off point The ask · 17 wordsI would like my colleague to commit to defending these areas of jurisdiction and protecting the environment. Claims · 9 wordsShe told us she came from the oil industry.2 Positioning · 15 wordsI respect that experience but, at the same time, her viewpoints may differ from mine.Positioning The ask · 10 wordsI would like her to reassure me on this issue.Off point

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