“Madam Speaker, I would like my colleague to explain in greater detail how this bill will help veterans of the Canadian Armed Forces successfully transition to civilian life. I agree with her. I have seen cases like this in my constituency. Many individuals leave the armed forces for a variety of reasons, only to find themselves with nothing. They have no job, no social network and no recognition for their service. I have studied Bill C-40, but I am not sure I can see any concrete improvements in it. In her view, how will Bill C-40 help these people?”
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The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 79. The grade is held to 73, 30 above Relevance.
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Madam Speaker, Claims · 129 wordsI hope my colleague will agree that aerospace is one of the flagship sectors of Quebec’s economy.I have spoken with companies in the sector, and one Quebec-based SME told me that it could hire 300 people tomorrow morning, but our educational institutions are not currently able to train enough workers to meet the demand for these highly rewarding careers.We have veterans who have acquired these skills, this expertise, and who are simply waiting for those qualifications to be recognized.We are currently working with certain educational institutions to accelerate the recognition of skills acquired in the Canadian Armed Forces so that veterans can step in to fill labour shortages.The aerospace sector alone will need 65,000 new workers over the next 10 years.1These are technical trades.Reasoning · 33 wordsOur role is to recognize veterans’ expertise and translate it into a certification that allows them to practise a Red Seal trade and pursue a meaningful career involving a wide range of technologies.Partly on pointVague promise