Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 67%Reasoning 16%Thanks 17%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Claims · 97 wordslast October 11, I organized a “Tribute to Men of Terrebonne” ceremony to honour five outstanding men for their amazing contributions to our community.1Today, I wish to honour Chadi Ayoub for his commitment to the arts and to promoting the region’s culture; Éric Barrette, for his dedication to education, sports and the success of our youth; Gilles Bordonado, for his contribution to journalism, communications and our community’s development; Raymond Paquin, for his incredible work to preserve our history and heritage; and Dr. Harry Max Prochette, for his devotion to the health and well-being of our citizens.Reasoning · 23 wordsThese five men remind us that commitment comes in many forms, but always targets the same goal: to improve the lives of others.Thanks · 24 wordsTo each of these gentlemen, I offer my gratitude for your dedication and your contributions to our community.You are the pride of Terrebonne.Thanks