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Jean-Denis Garon

232 words · 9 sentences · 14 clauses

Replying to Claude DeBellefeuille (Bloc Québécois)
“Madam Speaker, it is always a great pleasure to listen to my colleague from Mirabel. As we know, in addition to being a member of Parliament, he is a university professor. He has a Ph.D. in economics, so when he speaks, it always makes an impression. I feel like I am getting an economics 101 lesson when I listen to his speeches. I wanted to thank him for that. There is one thing he may not have had time to mention. The government is currently implementing budget cuts. It is cutting budgets in the public service and is also making cuts to direct services. Take, for example, what is happening in federal prisons, whose budgets have been slashed by $132 million and which have had to reduce the number of correctional officers on the front lines. As a result, inmates have managed to get items such as food and alcohol delivered to them by drone. There are significant budget cuts happening, and I think the government should rethink its priorities. It gives everything to the oil companies and nothing to seniors and prisons. What does my colleague think?”
Statement grade
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Average 92 / 100
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Positioning 19%Claims 47%Reasoning 19%Aside 3%The ask 12%

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Madam Speaker, Positioning · 18 wordsthis is what can happen when budget cuts are made quickly across the board, using a blanket approach.Positioning Claims · 66 wordsThe government decided that, aside from defence and two or three other organizations, every department will face 15% budget cuts.1 With regard to penitentiaries, the Archambault facility was located in my riding before the electoral boundaries were revised.2 There were significant security issues there, including people smuggling in 3-D printed parts for firearms.3 Thankfully, no one ever smuggled in enough parts to build a whole firearm.4 Reasoning · 43 wordsThe people who work there provide a direct service, one that is essential both to the safety of Quebeckers and Canadians and to that of inmates, as well as to maintaining public confidence in our correctional system and in the rule of law. Claims · 17 wordsThere is this notion that budget cuts can be made everywhere and AI can be brought in, Aside · 6 wordsas though we were at McKinsey, AsideClaims · 27 wordsand that it will deliver the same results because the federal government does not really provide services. In fact, the government provides few enough as it is, The ask · 29 wordsso I think it should give special consideration to those areas where services are actually being delivered and where public confidence in our most fundamental institutions could be undermined. Positioning · 26 wordsThe situation in our penitentiaries illustrates what can happen when the intentions are good, but the desire is to move too fast and go too far.Positioning

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