Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Scot Davidson

145 words · 8 sentences · 10 clauses

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Anecdote 7%Positioning 43%Claims 35%Reasoning 6%Thanks 9%

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Mr. Speaker, Anecdote · 10 wordsthey say, “You meet the nicest people [in] a Honda.”1Anecdote Positioning · 27 wordsAs the MP for York—South Simcoe, the proud home of Honda Canada, I can say that the people who build Hondas are every bit as nice too.2Positioning Claims · 51 wordsNext week, Honda celebrates 40 years of continuous car-making excellence in Canada since its plant first opened in Alliston, Ontario, on November 3, 1986.3 Today, it produces the Honda Civic, the Canadian car of the year.4 More than 4,000 Canadians work there, 5and it supports 30,000 more jobs across the sector.6 Positioning · 26 wordsFrom the associates on the line to the suppliers and dealers who put Canadians behind the wheel, every one of them has helped build this legacy.Positioning Reasoning · 8 wordsCanadian manufacturing succeeds when we stand behind it. Thanks · 13 wordsTo everyone at Honda, I wish a happy 40th and all the best, ThanksPositioning · 10 wordsas it keeps the power of dreams driving themselves forward.Positioning

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