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John Zerucelli

76 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Colin Reynolds (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada faces a 29-year low in workforce participation. The job-finding rate has dropped again, now down to 30.6% under the Liberal government. Canadians are losing jobs and they are losing hope. While Canada has a job crisis, the government has chosen to give public subsidies to a company that fired Canadian workers to hire foreign workers. Why did the fisheries minister approve a public subsidy to Ichiboshi L.P.C. after the company had already been caught firing Canadians to hire illegal workers?”
Statement grade
C–
58 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 41%Procedure 7%Claims 53%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 22 wordsI would like to remind the Conservatives, while they talk down Canada and talk down our workers, that this country is building.PositioningOff point Procedure · 5 wordsLet me give some examples.Procedure Claims · 40 wordsMaybe the member has forgotten about LNG Canada phase two, with $33 billion in private investment and 4,000 new construction jobs.1 The Nouveau Monde Graphite project means 1,000 new jobs.2 At the Darlington nuclear station, there are thousands of jobs.3 Positioning · 9 wordsCanada is building.Partly on point I hope the Conservatives join us.PositioningOff point

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