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Joël Lightbound

116 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Jean-Yves Duclos (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, Canada has everything the world needs: skilled workers, innovative businesses, strong infrastructure, abundant natural resources, as well as a reliable, stable country and government. That helps explain the success of the recent investment summit in Toronto, which unleashed $500 billion in commitments for our businesses and workers. Another reason for that success is the productivity mega deduction, which will allow businesses of all sizes to deduct a wide range of assets so they have more money to invest in their workers and their companies. Can my colleague from the Quebec City region, the Minister of Government Transformation, tell the House how Canadians—”
Statement grade
C–
55 / 100, held down by Reasoning
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Greeting 9%Claims 74%Positioning 17%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 10 wordsI would like to thank my colleague from Québec Centre.Greeting Claims · 86 wordsHe is right. We made a choice: to invest in Canadian businesses and create good-paying jobs. That is exactly what we are doing with the productivity mega deduction, which will generate $22 billion in annual economic benefits and support up to 80,000 new jobs each year.1No reason given In fact, what we are doing is making Canada the OECD country with the most competitive tax rate by a wide margin.2No reason given This will empower our small, medium-sized and large businesses to achieve their ambitions, to grow, succeed and innovate. Positioning · 20 wordsThat is how we build Canada strong and ensure that we remain masters in our own house, now and forever.PositioningPartly on pointNo reason given

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