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Rebecca Alty

60 words · 4 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Gord Johns (NDP)
“Mr. Speaker, the Conservatives want to scrap B.C.’s north coast oil tanker ban, putting our coastal communities and indigenous livelihoods at risk. The Prime Minister has already promised to uphold the ban, yet Canadians are being asked to shoulder the financial risks of another costly pipeline. As the Prime Minister meets with first nations leaders and premiers, this is a moment to build trust, not break promises. Will the Prime Minister stand up today and unequivocally commit to protecting the north coast tanker ban, respecting indigenous rights and keeping his government’s promise?”
Statement grade
B–
70 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 10%Claims 63%Positioning 13%Reasoning 13%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 6 wordsI want to be very clear.Procedure Claims · 38 wordsThe building Canada strong act would not change the duty to consult.1 The bill proposes a centralized Crown consultation hub so that indigenous peoples can spend less time navigating government red tape and more time having meaningful conversations.2Partly on point Positioning · 8 wordsOur government is focused on building Canada strong, PositioningOff pointVague promiseReasoning · 8 wordsand we cannot do that without indigenous peoples.Partly on point

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