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Ryan Turnbull

125 words · 7 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Grant Jackson (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, what an embarrassingly out-of-touch response that was from the parliamentary secretary. I asked about specific, tangible, physical projects that the Liberal government is pursuing for my home province, and all the member had to offer was that he visited it one time and had a 30-minute chat with the finance minister at the provincial level. How typical of the out-of-touch Liberals to forget about the province of Manitoba. Here are a couple of facts for the member. According to its own website, there are 20 major projects with the Major Projects Office. How many of those 20 major projects are in Manitoba? Not one. The port of Churchill plus is Manitoba’s only specifically identified initiative, and the government classifies it as a “transformative strategy”, not a major project, with absolutely zero details listed. Meanwhile, other provinces have eight, three or two projects listed. When will the Liberal government and the six Liberal MPs prioritize major projects in Manitoba?”
Statement grade
C
63 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Claims 64%Reasoning 18%Promise 18%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 49 wordsManitoba is without exception a priority for this government, Vague promiseand I am sure it is a priority to the Premier of Manitoba. There are projects and opportunities that we recognize.Vague promise The Major Projects Office has been set up to advance projects in the national interest that meet the criteria.1 Reasoning · 22 wordsTransformative strategies are nothing to be ashamed of. Those are excellent projects as well, and there are quite a number of them.Vague promise Claims · 31 wordsIn fact, the projects across Canada that we are advancing, in partnership with first nations and the premiers of each province, are good news for this country’s prosperity in the future.Vague promise Promise · 23 wordsWe look forward to expediting those projects as soon as the member and his colleagues bring forward more projects that we can advance.Partly on pointVague promise

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