“Mr. Speaker, I listened intently, and I really appreciate the concerns the member brought up. Our children’s safety is paramount, and he talked about how scary it is when they go into a different world when they are online. One of the things Bill C-34 would do is create the digital safety commission, which would allow us to make sure we are protecting our children. Can the member elaborate on some of the things the commission would have and how important it is?”
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Mr. Speaker, Reasoning · 60 wordsit is important to have a regulator with some teeth.Again, we can talk about letting parents parent and about the concerns about free speech, which are genuine and need to be discussed in this place, Partly on pointbut in the absence of a regulator to enforce the bill and to hold companies to account, it is going to be a challenge.Positioning · 17 wordsThese are powerful companies that are going to do whatever they can to water down this bill.PositioningAnecdote · 5 wordsI have seen it before, AnecdoteReasoning · 15 wordsbut we have to do our best to provide actual concrete protections for our children, Vague promiseClaims · 8 wordsand I believe the commission would do that.
