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Jacques Ramsay

59 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Marilyn Gladu (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, this bill does something very important: Anything that is currently illegal in the real world will also be illegal in the digital world. How can we ensure compliance with our laws?”
Statement grade
B+
Average 82 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Procedure 14%Claims 36%Reasoning 29%Promise 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Procedure · 8 wordsmy colleague just made a very important point.Procedure Claims · 21 wordsBill C‑41 does what is being done elsewhere.Partly on point It regulates things that are not allowed, such as bullying and sexual exploitation.1 Reasoning · 17 wordsBasically, we need to recognize that online life is just as important in this day and age.Partly on point Promise · 13 wordsWe are doing that by introducing regulations that will evolve as technology evolves.Vague promise

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