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Steven MacKinnon

83 words · 5 sentences · 5 clauses

Replying to Jacques Gourde (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, farmers along the high-speed rail route want to be heard by the Liberal government, and they deserve to be heard. However, it seems that the government listens more to visitors from Europe. What is wrong with this picture? The Liberals are silencing Canadians whose land will be expropriated by European-style projects that have no guarantee of long-term profitability. When will this Liberal government do something about Canadians’ suffering by axing the federal taxes on diesel?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 73 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 29%Promise 49%Claims 22%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 24 wordsit should come as no surprise that the Conservatives are doubling down on their opposition to a promising project that will benefit all Quebeckers.PositioningPartly on point Promise · 36 wordsOf course we will continue to listen to the agricultural community when it comes to building high-speed rail.Vague promise We will also continue to listen to the agricultural community when it comes to the cost of fuel.Vague promise Claims · 18 wordsWe have cut the tax and we have extended that cut in fuel prices for the farming community.12 Promise · 5 wordsWe will continue to listen.Vague promise

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