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Jim Bélanger

89 words · 6 sentences · 9 clauses

Replying to Luc Berthold (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, I want to thank my colleague for his interest in this very important question, namely protecting young people online. I would ask him to speak on a more personal level and tell us about the people in his riding. This is an issue that concerns more than just the members of the House. The protection of children online is a concern for all parents. Is he, like me, hearing more and more about people’s fears regarding the many dangers that now lurk online for young people?”
Statement grade
C–
58 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 40%Anecdote 51%Reasoning 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Claims · 9 wordsyes, that is absolutely the case in my riding. Anecdote · 45 wordsCloser to home, in my family, I have three young people who are parents, 1and they tell me all the time that what is happening on social media today is very worrisome. In my grandmother’s day, as I was saying, progress took a long time.Anecdote Claims · 19 wordsWe went from horse-drawn carriages to the telephone, then to radio, television, 2and sending a man to the moon.3 Reasoning · 8 wordsAll of these things took a long time.Off point Claims · 8 wordsHowever, today, social media is advancing alarmingly quickly.Partly on point

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