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Caroline Desrochers

101 words · 7 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Helena Konanz (Conservative)
“Madam Speaker, children need real protection online. Is Bill C-34 the best solution? That approach is not working in Australia, for example.”
Statement grade
C+
Average 68 / 100
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Thanks 13%Positioning 12%Claims 41%Promise 35%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 13 wordsI thank my colleague for asking her question in French.1 I appreciate it.Thanks Positioning · 12 wordsThat does not mean that we agree, but I am still appreciative.Positioning Claims · 41 wordsFrom what I heard from my children, the Mauricie youth council and stakeholders, I can say that this bill is necessary. It enacts laws like the digital safety act and digital safety commission of Canada act.3 It creates a new commission.2 Promise · 35 wordsWe really want to put the tools in place to achieve our goal of holding the digital platforms to account and ensuring that they do what it takes to protect our children here in Canada.Partly on pointVague promise

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