Analysis · Debate reply · beta

Caroline Desrochers

88 words · 6 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Angelo Iacono (Liberal)
“Madam Speaker, the bill provides for financial penalties of up to 3% of a company’s global revenue. How will these penalties encourage companies to comply with the law, particularly large multinationals?”
Statement grade
A–
Average 87 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 10%Claims 51%Reasoning 34%Procedure 5%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Madam Speaker, Thanks · 9 wordsthat is an excellent question from my esteemed colleague.Thanks Claims · 45 wordsOver the past few months, we have witnessed a number of high-profile disputes involving online platforms.Partly on point In response, many of these platforms have already begun voluntarily introducing the sort of environment we want for our young people. Financial penalties will certainly be a further asset. Reasoning · 16 wordsHowever, beyond financial penalties, there is also the question of a platform’s liability and reputational damage. Procedure · 4 wordsWe know this now: ProcedureUnearned certaintyReasoning · 14 wordsOur young people are capable of making choices, and they do exercise those choices.Off point

Analysed on