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Jacques Ramsay

145 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

Replying to Alex Ruff (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, first off, I want to thank the parliamentary secretary for his personal commitment with respect to the deadline being extended should any legal firearms owners have any issues with shipping. I appreciate that clarification. If I hear from any of my constituents, I will be sure to hold him to it. I want to correct his speech a bit. He made a comment that many of these 2,000 models of firearms that were banned are not appropriate for hunting and sport shooting. He is completely factually incorrect. I helped review the military’s statement of requirements with respect to small arms firearms. There is not a single one, with the exception of one sniper rifle, on the whole list that would ever be used by the military. Therefore, in closing, I want to ask him the same question I have been asking the Liberal government for six years. Could he define what he means by a “military-style assault rifle”?”
Statement grade
D
48 / 100, held down by Relevance
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Claims 72%Positioning 10%Reasoning 6%Procedure 12%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 13 wordswe have left it to experts to determine which firearms are assault rifles. Positioning · 6 wordsThis is not a political matter.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsIt is for experts to decide. Basically, there are firearms that can do massive amounts of damage, Reasoning · 8 wordsas we have seen in mass shootings recently. Claims · 14 wordsNo single program in this initiative can tackle the challenge of gun violence alone.Off point Procedure · 17 wordsAs a matter of fact, the government’s comprehensive plan to keep Canadians safe from guns also includes, ProcedureClaims · 61 wordsand this is important to mention, strengthening our borders, tougher penalties for smuggling guns, red flag laws and the revocation of licences in cases of intimate partner violence. There is also the gun and gang violence action fund and the building safer communities fund. With these initiatives, the government is taking concrete steps to make Canada less vulnerable to firearm violence, Positioning · 9 wordswhile being fair to responsible and law-abiding firearms owners.PositioningOff point

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