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Mel Arnold

178 words · 8 sentences · 11 clauses

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Claims 53%Anecdote 35%Reasoning 6%Promise 6%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 83 wordsas poppies bloom on lapels across the nation, we are reminded of the people who have sacrificed everything so that we can live free. From the Boer War in 1899 through the first and second world wars, the Korean War, the Gulf War and the war in Afghanistan, 1and in peacetime, Canada’s women and men in uniform have given everything and carried immense burdens for all of us. Recent tragedies, such as the loss in Wainwright, underscore the ongoing depth of their sacrifices.2 Anecdote · 63 wordsI am reminded of my own grandfather Jesse Pullin, who served in the First World War for Britain and, after immigrating to Canada, returned and served for Canada in the Second World War.3 He came back with shrapnel and other wounds, 4but in all the years I knew him, he never spoke of the battles and atrocities he saw or the hardships endured.Anecdote Claims · 11 wordsMany carried and carry similar physical wounds and deep emotional scars. Reasoning · 11 wordsWe must not forget what they have given for our peace. Promise · 10 wordsOn Remembrance Day, and every day, we will remember them.

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