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John Zerucelli

79 words · 8 sentences · 8 clauses

Replying to Sandra Cobena (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, if the Prime Minister has no intention of touching Canadians’ pension funds, then why does his government use those very same pension assets to make Canada’s debt look smaller? He cannot have it both ways. Either he intends to use the pensions to repay his debt, or those savings are not available to repay it. Why is he using Canadians’ retirement savings to assure Canadians about the national debt? When will the Prime Minister stop hiding behind pensions and tell them how he intends to repay the debt?”
Statement grade
C+
67 / 100, held down by Relevance
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The question 18%Claims 53%Procedure 9%Promise 11%Positioning 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, The question · 14 wordsis the Conservative Party’s official position on inflation to buy Bitcoin, yes or no?Off point Claims · 15 wordsCanada has the best fiscal position in the G7.1 We have a AAA credit rating.2Partly on point Procedure · 7 wordsWhat does that allow us to do?Procedure Claims · 27 wordsThat allows us to invest in this country. It allows us to build projects in the national interest using Canadian lumber, Canadian steel and Canadian unionized workers.3 Promise · 9 wordsWe are going to continue to build this country.Vague promise Positioning · 7 wordsI hope the Conservatives get on board.PositioningPartly on point

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