“Mr. Speaker, yesterday, the government unveiled our new national security plan, the first comprehensive update of its kind in more than 20 years. At a time of increasing geopolitical instability, foreign interference, cyber-threats and economic uncertainty, this strategy will help ensure that Canada is prepared to meet the challenges of today and tomorrow. Can the Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of Public Safety tell the House why this landmark strategy is important for the country?”
Statement grade
C
The average of Signal, Relevance, Reasoning, Respect and Clarity is 73. The grade is held to 62, 30 above Clarity. Reasoning rests on one conclusion, too few to hold the grade down.
62 / 100, held down by Clarity
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Thanks 28%Claims 52%Positioning 19%
This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.
Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 25 wordsI want to thank the hon. member for Orléans.She has always been a strong voice for making Canada and the world a safer place.ThanksClaims · 5 wordsThe world is changing rapidly, Positioning · 17 wordsand our government is ensuring that Canada is prepared to meet evolving challenges at home and abroad.PositioningVague promiseClaims · 41 words“The Plan for a Stronger Canada” sets out a comprehensive whole-of-government approach to strengthening our national security.1It will strengthen our economy, build stronger international partnerships, modernize our military and intelligence capabilities, 2Vague promiseand protect Canadians from criminal and national security threats.Vague promise