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Jacques Ramsay

88 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Marie-France Lalonde (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, yesterday, the government unveiled our new national security plan, the first comprehensive update of its kind in more than 20 years. At a time of increasing geopolitical instability, foreign interference, cyber-threats and economic uncertainty, this strategy will help ensure that Canada is prepared to meet the challenges of today and tomorrow. Can the Parliamentary Secretary to the Minister of Public Safety tell the House why this landmark strategy is important for the country?”
Statement grade
C
62 / 100, held down by Clarity
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Thanks 28%Claims 52%Positioning 19%

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Mr. Speaker, Thanks · 25 wordsI want to thank the hon. member for Orléans. She has always been a strong voice for making Canada and the world a safer place.Thanks Claims · 5 wordsThe world is changing rapidly, Positioning · 17 wordsand our government is ensuring that Canada is prepared to meet evolving challenges at home and abroad.PositioningVague promise Claims · 41 words“The Plan for a Stronger Canada” sets out a comprehensive whole-of-government approach to strengthening our national security.1 It will strengthen our economy, build stronger international partnerships, modernize our military and intelligence capabilities, 2Vague promiseand protect Canadians from criminal and national security threats.Vague promise

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