“Madam Speaker, I appreciate that the member clearly indicated that how health information technology is handled is absolutely critical and that he supports the principle of the legislation. I am encouraged by that. In terms of the whole mismanagement area, it was the Harper government that brought in Phoenix. There is no escaping that. In other words, there are ways in which, no doubt, we can learn from past experiences in order to advance the principle of a good idea. I appreciate the member’s knowledge, I must say. I am quite impressed with his background and his understanding of the urgency of this. I believe that it would be best addressed at the committee stage. I wonder if he could provide his thoughts on whether he thinks this legislation will pass, given that the Senate has already supported it in principle.”
Statement grade
C+
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity is 72. The grade is held to 67, 30 above Relevance.
67 / 100, held down by Relevance
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Aside 19%Claims 40%Reasoning 41%
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Madam Speaker, Aside · 11 wordsI think this is becoming a bit of a running gag.AsidePartly on pointClaims · 20 wordsAfter literally every speech I give in this House, the member for Winnipeg North stands and says, “but Stephen Harper”.1Unearned certaintyAside · 18 wordsI suspect that he checks under his bed for Stephen Harper before he goes to sleep at night.AsideOff pointClaims · 20 wordsIn general, I criticized the federal government trying to do things that cannot be done.This is a vast country.2Reasoning · 61 wordsIf this problem were solvable, it would be solvable close to home at a low level.If a single province cannot get this done within its borders, I do not understand how any federal government, Stephen Harper’s or otherwise, would be able to achieve that.Is it still a good idea to do something that is well-intentioned but doomed to failure?Claims · 20 wordsPart of the answer to that is how much money the Liberals plan to spend on their well-intentioned, doomed project.Partly on point