“Madam Speaker, what really resonated with me is what my colleague and friend said about breaking down silos and creating the condition for connected care. That is exactly what this bill is aiming to do. My colleague mentioned that in Quebec, there is already a system in place for that, so I want to ask him to describe the benefits he is already seeing in his community and the benefits he wishes to see once we have a connected system across the country.”
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Thanks 14%Claims 49%Procedure 2%Reasoning 35%
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Madam Speaker, Thanks · 25 wordsI would like to begin by thanking the parliamentary secretary for her question and for her work both in government and in her wonderful riding.ThanksClaims · 41 wordsThe first thing I can say about Quebec is that it has already proven itself.It has done its job.Bill S‑5 takes nothing away from Quebec.1As I said earlier, its purpose is to assist, support and accelerate the work.2Procedure · 4 wordsHere is an example: ProcedureClaims · 22 wordsA mother in my riding, Bourassa, goes in with an envelope or a bag containing information that she cannot make sense of.Reasoning · 41 wordsImagine what it must be like for a doctor to go through that information compared to looking at a file that is available directly to them.Obviously, reading it that way is not the same; the jargon is not the same.Claims · 22 wordsWe want to make that information accessible.Vague promiseThe goal is to save time and provide more direct services to people, to patients, Reasoning · 20 wordsbecause most of the time should be spent with them, and that is where the greatest impact can be made.
