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Tamara Kronis

62 words · 5 sentences · 7 clauses

Replying to Kevin Lamoureux (Liberal)
“Mr. Speaker, again, I am going to recognize that what we are talking about is doctors, hospitals, institutions and pharmacists, all of which have records. Some provinces are much further advanced than other provinces. I think of the province of Ontario or of Quebec compared to my home province. Having legislation of this nature is ultimately in the best interest of all patients in all regions of the country. I would like to get the member’s thoughts on that issue.”
Statement grade
F
38 / 100, held down by Signal
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Positioning 61%Procedure 31%Claims 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 38 wordsI think we all know that sound travels more slowly than light, 1Unearned certaintyso sometimes it takes Ottawa longer to hear the needs of British Columbians.Partly on point We are looking forward to seeing a time when those records are portable.PositioningVague promise Procedure · 19 wordsI cannot say it more clearly than that. Let us get this right, though. Let us get it right, ProcedureClaims · 5 wordsbecause it would save lives.

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