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Kevin Lamoureux

102 words · 5 sentences · 6 clauses

Replying to Kelly DeRidder (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, one thing in particular the member opposite said that I would like to concentrate on is that we have to look at this through the lens of the patient. I wholeheartedly agree with that, and the lens I am going to look through is data security. If this is implemented across Canada in partnership of course with the provinces, how would we ensure that, first, it would still be the patient who would decide whether the data is going to be transferred, and, second, how would that data be protected?”
Statement grade
C+
Average 66 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Positioning 51%Reasoning 49%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 11 wordsthe member, in posing the questions, highlighted something I had indicated.Positioning Reasoning · 50 wordsIf everyone would do exactly what she did with respect to her question, which is to put the patient first and look at it through that lens, I suspect that the debate would be well served not only on the floor of the House of Commons but also in committee. Positioning · 41 wordsI can assure the member that it does not matter what side of the House one looks at. I believe every member wants to ensure the privacy and protection of data.Unearned certainty There is no doubt whatsoever in my mind on that.PositioningPartly on pointUnearned certainty

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