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Blake Richards

169 words · 6 sentences · 10 clauses

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Greeting 20%Reasoning 9%Thanks 34%Claims 24%The ask 14%

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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 33 wordsas we begin Veterans’ Week and we approach Remembrance Day, I had the privilege of co-hosting a reception this afternoon for the Royal Canadian Air Force Foundation under the leadership of Jeremy Diamond.1Greeting Reasoning · 15 wordsWhen Canadians think of veterans, minds can often drift to historical black and white photos. Thanks · 11 wordsWe remain deeply appreciative of the freedoms that they fought for, ThanksClaims · 40 wordsbut there are also heroes who walk among us today. They are our neighbours, parents of young children and colleagues that we work with, and they bore heavy burdens in modern conflicts like Afghanistan, the Gulf, and many other missions. Thanks · 47 wordsBy supporting modern veterans and inspiring tomorrow’s aviation leaders, the Royal Canadian Air Force Foundation bridges our history with our future through STEM scholarships, with recipients joining us today, including Anjana Ramaswamy, Clare Balkissoon, Arabella Allen, Nehsy Poinen, Declan McCloskey, Virajdeep Rattan, Lucy Levy and Vincent Bujold-Roux.2Thanks The ask · 23 wordsLet us stand united behind our veterans, past and present, Vague promiseand remember that a life of service is the only life worth living.

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