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Abdelhaq Sari

161 words · 10 sentences · 12 clauses

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Average 90 / 100
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Claims 38%Reasoning 30%The ask 8%Thanks 16%Positioning 8%

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Mr. Speaker, Claims · 61 wordssince June, certain facts have been coming to light about the Service de police de la Ville de Montréal.1 A team at station 39 was disbanded, allegations of racist acts were made, 2and evidence of domestic violence provided by a victim was allegedly destroyed. On Monday, we learned that the police force had fired seven police officers.3 That response was necessary. Reasoning · 18 wordsHowever, for the riding of Bourassa, it is neither a finish line nor the end of the matter. The ask · 13 wordsI am telling the police force that it needs to meet the moment. Reasoning · 8 wordsMontrealers are entitled to transparency and public accountability. Thanks · 26 wordsI am thinking about the people who were affected, the families who were afraid and the police officers who had the integrity to break the silence.Thanks Positioning · 13 wordsI want to remind all of those people that they are not alone.Positioning Reasoning · 22 wordsIn Canada, safety is not a privilege, dignity is not negotiable, and a person’s background should not determine how they are treated.

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