Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Gérard Deltell

149 words · 7 sentences · 11 clauses

Statement grade
A–
Average 86 / 100
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Claims 24%Promise 38%Positioning 19%Thanks 19%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 10 wordsthe budget will be tabled in less than two hours, 1Promise · 57 wordsand we, the Conservatives, want Canadians to have more money in their pockets. That is why we are proposing to eliminate gas taxes, 2which have a real impact on the cost of food and other goods, to reduce wasteful and inflationary spending and to save Canadians money at the pumps, at the grocery store and everywhere else. Positioning · 9 wordsFor businesses, we want what they want: less bureaucracy.Positioning Thanks · 28 wordsIncidentally, I commend the representative of the Association hôtelière de la région de Québec who came to Ottawa to highlight the hotel industry’s contribution to Quebec’s economic growth.3Thanks Claims · 8 wordsSix hundred million dollars in spinoffs is good, 4Positioning · 6 wordsbut too much bureaucracy is not.Positioning Claims · 18 wordsAlthough the Prime Minister, the prominent banker, promised affordability, everything has become more expensive since he took over.5 Positioning · 13 wordsFor the sake of all Canadians, we are hoping for a responsible budget.Positioning

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