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Statement grade
The average of Signal, Relevance, Respect and Clarity.
Average 56 / 100
Signal
30 / 100
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Relevance
26 / 100
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Respect
100 / 100
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Clarity
67 / 100
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Positioning 66% Claims 34%
Structure · 4 steps
Claims · 1
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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 56 words the Conservatives are so committed to their pessimistic world view that they cannot see past the paper that was handed to them in their lobby to read off these QP questions that are repetitive every single day and punching down the Canadian economy. Off point We are here to promote Canada. We are here to invest in Canada. Positioning Claims · 35 words That is exactly what our government is doing, supporting people with affordability measures, growing the industries of tomorrow and creating jobs for tens of thousands of Canadians.1 Vague promise Vague promise That is what we were elected to do. Positioning · 13 words We will not apologize for being positive about the prospects of this country. Positioning Partly on point
At a glance
Lost points for Partly on point ×5 Positioning ×4 Vague promise ×2 Off point
Didn't answer None of this answer addressed the specific question that was asked.
Little substance Much of this statement went to praise, blame, greetings, routine procedure or general stories rather than reasons, requests or specific points.
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Signal · 30
4 of 12 deductions are Signal
Signal checks whether every part makes a point, gives a reason, or asks for action. A low score means the speaker filled time with fluff, pleasantries, or attacks.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “the Conservatives are so committed to their pessimistic world view that they cannot see past the paper that was handed to them in their lobby to read off these QP questions that are repetitive every single day and punching down the Canadian economy.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We are here to promote Canada.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We are here to invest in Canada.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Positioning Praise, blame or attack with no claim, reason or ask in it. What the tags mean → “We will not apologize for being positive about the prospects of this country.” Positioning: praise, blame or attack. No claim, reason or ask.
Relevance · 26
6 of 12 deductions are Relevance
Relevance checks whether the speaker stays on topic and answers the question asked. A low score means the speaker dodged the issue. Measured against the question asked.
Off point Talking about something other than the matter at hand: the question asked, or the bill, motion or speech under debate. What the tags mean → “the Conservatives are so committed to their pessimistic world view that they cannot see past the paper that was handed to them in their lobby to read off these QP questions that are repetitive every single day and punching down the Canadian economy.” An attack on the questioner’s motives and their daily questions, not an answer on who pays the debt.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “We are here to promote Canada.” A general statement of promoting Canada, not who will pay for the debt.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “We are here to invest in Canada.” A general statement of investing in Canada, not who will pay for the debt.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “That is exactly what our government is doing, supporting people with affordability measures, growing the industries of tomorrow and creating jobs for tens of thousands of Canadians.” Lists other measures on affordability and jobs, not how the debt will be paid for.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “That is what we were elected to do.” A claim about the government’s mandate, not who will pay for the debt.
Partly on point Staying near the subject without addressing the matter at hand: what was asked, or what the bill, motion or speech is about. What the tags mean → “We will not apologize for being positive about the prospects of this country.” Praise of the government’s own outlook, not how the debt will be paid for.
Respect · 100
0 of 12 deductions are Respect
Respect checks whether the speaker argued with people’s positions and records rather than attacking the people: insults, mockery, or bad motives assigned to them. Criticism of what someone did, however strong, is not marked.
Nothing lost points.
Clarity · 67
2 of 12 deductions are Clarity
Clarity checks for plain speaking, clear ownership of actions, and honest limits on certainty. A low score means vague promises or evasive language.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “supporting people with affordability measures” No measure, date, or actor is named for the affordability support.
Vague promise A promise with no date, no measure and no one responsible. What the tags mean → “growing the industries of tomorrow” No specific industry, measure, or date is identified.
Claims · 1
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1 “creating jobs for tens of thousands of Canadians” The government’s actions are creating jobs for tens of thousands of Canadians. search