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Steven MacKinnon

68 words · 4 sentences · 4 clauses

Replying to Michael Cooper (Conservative)
“Mr. Speaker, Telesat received a $2.3-billion contract from the government. The CEO of Telesat just happens to be a close personal friend of the Prime Minister. Section 9 of the Conflict of Interest Act states that a public office holder shall not influence a decision to further the interests of a friend. Did the Prime Minister discuss, and I emphasize the word discuss, this $2.3-billion contract with his staff or anyone in government, yes or no?”
Statement grade
B–
Average 72 / 100
A score under 50 is red. Choose a measurement to see where it lost points and why; choose it again to clear.
Claims 47%Positioning 44%Promise 9%

This view breaks the statement into its steps and names what each one does.

Mr. Speaker, Claims · 18 wordsas the member well knows, Canada has among the most stringent ethics guidelines and laws in the world.1 Positioning · 30 wordsThese measures and these rules are followed rigorously by all members on this side of the House and, indeed, I assume, all members of the House and all senior officials.Positioning Claims · 14 wordsThe Conflict of Interest Act and other measures are constantly followed and constantly updated. Promise · 6 wordsWe will continue to follow them.Partly on pointVague promise

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