Not graded: a tribute or commemoration is there to honour, not to make a case.
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Greeting 11%Claims 69%Thanks 20%
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Mr. Speaker, Greeting · 15 wordsit is my tremendous honour to celebrate the Ottawa Aboriginal Coalition on their 25th anniversary.GreetingClaims · 94 wordsThe Ottawa Aboriginal Coalition is an amazing partnership of eight organizations supporting the urban indigenous community in Ottawa.1They came together in 2001 to tackle a number of issues facing the community, with a particular focus on health and homelessness.2Last night, we had a remarkable community gathering with members of the urban indigenous community from Ottawa and with the broader community coming together to celebrate the Ottawa Aboriginal Coalition.3It is the elders and speakers that are part of the coalition, and learning from their wisdom, that make the whole experience so worthy.Thanks · 28 wordsI want to congratulate the Ottawa Aboriginal Coalition for the tremendous work they do and wish them all the best for the next 25, 50 and 100 years.Thanks