Analysis · Members' statement · beta

Rachel Bendayan

184 words · 10 sentences · 14 clauses

Statement grade
A+
Average 95 / 100
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Positioning 11%Claims 72%Promise 16%

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Mr. Speaker, Positioning · 9 wordsmental health is an issue I care about deeply.Positioning Claims · 17 wordsOver half of Canadians aged 40 or more have confronted a mental health problem at some point.1 Positioning · 9 wordsThey could be our friends, neighbours or loved ones.Positioning Claims · 73 wordsIn the Plateau and Mile End, we are fortunate to have the Regroupement des organismes pour hommes de l’Île de Montréal, or ROHIM, the Centre d’apprentissage parallèle, the Suivi communautaire le fil and many other community organizations to turn to.2 Our federal government has just announced a historic investment in mental health and addictions.3 As Movember begins, we are reminded that one in five Canadians has already had a problem with mental health.4 Positioning · 3 wordsThat is huge, PositioningClaims · 43 wordsand we know that men have trouble breaking the silence. The results of our consultation on men and boys’ health shows that we need to do much more, 5which is why our government is making a historic investment in mental health and addictions. Promise · 30 wordsI would like all those struggling out there to know that they matter and we see them. They deserve care when they need it, and they deserve it without judgment.

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